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huh [userpic]
by huh (crapdealer)
at August 24th, 2012 (10:22 am)

Why is there a post of a topless girl in this comm? Also, where are these Russians coming from?

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by ersjazfz (ersjazfz)
at August 23rd, 2012 (03:51 am)


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Jesse [userpic]
The badfic is back in business, baby!
by Jesse (himaryan)
at February 22nd, 2010 (04:37 pm)
sleepy

current location: Computer Chair
current mood: sleepy

Story Title: Sasukes death
Offender/Author's name: kakashi kid 23
Brief summary/violations list: BOLD FACE (but only for a chapter) , grammar/mechanics, spelling, weird format in general, character derailment, ect.
Brief excerpt, Not-so-brief excerpt, MST, ect.:

 

Excerpt of DOOMCollapse )


 

Rating: 3.5/5 It's pretty bad, but it's no My Immortal.


fairady [userpic]
Are these tears or is my brain leaking again?
by fairady (fairady)
at July 29th, 2009 (11:51 pm)

Story Title: A Deidara Love story Info/part 1
Offender/Author's Name: chels789
Brief Summary/Violations List: Massacring the English language, "you" are the Sue, script format, author's notes, sticky space key syndrome, character assassination, laziness, IQ suicide, and an amazing level of apathy for the story itself.
Not-so-brief excerpt, MST, etc.:

Where do I even begin?Collapse )
Rating: Everything you've got and then some! Just don't stop until the pain goes away. It takes a while but you'll get there.

Jesse [userpic]
So bad I laughed
by Jesse (himaryan)
at July 16th, 2009 (04:09 pm)
amused

current location: In a computer chair
current mood: amused

Story Title: Ironic
Offender: Ai Coddington
Violations List:  I couldn't read it all the way through. Not only is the writing very choppy and need to proofread evident, the character is a self insert. Her name is Ai Coddington when the author's name is... Ai Coddington. Everyone loves her (Helllllllo Mary-sue) and I love the fact that it uses both english and japanese honorfics. Hilarious stuff.

“‘This is my son, Edward’ the man said, ‘my name is John.’ I shook the man’s hand and went to his son. I could hardly move when I was in front of him. He was flawless. His blonde hair and those golden eyes. <- Okay, I just saw this. Anyone else think of Edward from Twilight? Just saying.

Random japanese, kthanxbai. Always "nani" and "arigatô" and yet she claims she lives and studies in Japan but visits Flordia for a vacation... hmm...

Too many OCs with English names. This isn't really a violation though... After all, there's nothing wrong with using an english name, but they usually turn out to be sues. *cough*

Sasuke had an off-screen death. Wow, poor Sasuke.

Oh wait, nevermind, he isn't dead. But in his "Dynamic" entrance, he calls Ai, "Dobe," which is usually what he calls Naruto... My inner-SasuNaru fan is a little more than outraged.

Well, hell. Chapter 67 was just a self-promotion of something else she's writing.

Actually, I recommend you don't read the story. In fact, read the reviews instead. That's what I did- and well... let's just say you will have a grand ole' time sifting through chatspeak and lots of anti-Sasuke and anti-Sakura comments. For the lulz, of course.

I hate stories in a ninja fandom that have nothing to do with ninjas... but that's just me.

Brief excerpt, Not-so-brief excerpt, MST, etc.:  This is the actual first paragraph of the entire story: I woke up and got changed. I was moving with my family today to go to the village Hidden in the Leafs. My family is messed up. My parents got devoiced when I was seven. I am now 14. Then my father became an alcoholic and smokes pot and weed. And my mother goes out with this two faced Hindu guy.
Rating: 4/5 headddesks Beacuse I'm feeling generous.

I would have put this in lj cut but it's not liking me at the moment... or I have the wrong code.


fairady [userpic]
We all live in a yellow submarine!
by fairady (fairady)
at April 25th, 2009 (02:27 pm)

Story Title: Past and Present
Offender/Author's Name: Glow_
Brief Summary/Violations List: This is your basic Sue fic (OMG!tragic past, awesome powerz, loved by all, ect.) nothing too new or exciting except the author first published it over on Quizilla. Also, a really unfortunate choice of a name.
Not-so-brief excerpt: Got to pay your dues if you wanna sing the blues.Collapse )
Rating: Eh, this only gets three headdesks out of five. The writing isn't atrocious, and the Sue doesn't get too out of hand at first. I'm sure the rating will up with another chapter.

Jesse [userpic]
You can't spell "slaughter" without "laughter"... Fandom proves this.
by Jesse (himaryan)
at December 30th, 2008 (09:06 am)
amused

current location: computer chair
current mood: amused
current song: Super Shooter by RIP Slime


Oh my. I found this and thought of you guys first <3 It demands judgement.

    Story Title: Youre Here In the darkness
    Offender/Author's Name: CrazyBunny24
    Brief Summary/Violations List:
    I don't think there is anything this person didn't offend...
    Brief excerpt, Not-so-brief excerpt, MST, etc.: (actual summary via copy and paste) haha yes i knew it was crappy the last time so here the sum sasuke meets the new kids naru, garr, neji, hina, tem, but the twist is thats asuke falls in love with vampire with unknown sceret can they trust sasuke
    Rating: 5/5 headdesks

    This fic was so bad, I actually laughed.The only thing I can credit this person for is that they are a fast updater (Except her chapters are short, but I look past that.)

    Oh wait, she's a Twilight fan... That explains it :D

fairady [userpic]
Google failed us all
by fairady (fairady)
at December 15th, 2008 (09:59 pm)

Ah, it's been a long time since I've been able to spork. *cracks knuckles* So then, lets get to it!

Story Title: Forgotten
Offender/Author's Name: Leilani Daniels
Brief Summary/Violations List: Existing. Morbid fascination of rape, a criminal misunderstanding of rape, not graduating beyond 'See Spot. See Spot run.' style of storytelling, author's notes, gratuitous abuse of readers, and pure unrelenting stupidity.
Brief excerpt, Not-so-brief excerpt, MST, etc.:

I don't think that 'rape' means what you think it means.Collapse )
Rating: 3 out of 5 because this fic somehow manages to trigger pure apathy as well as horror.

Jesse [userpic]
Enter key abuse
by Jesse (himaryan)
at November 24th, 2008 (05:12 pm)
current location: computer chair
current mood: busy
current song: Jibun Kakumei 2003

Hi! I'm new to this community, but I absolutely adore it. Since no one has posted for awhile, I thought I should put this up.


Story Title: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3516778/3/The_girl_who_shouldnt_be_forgotten
Offender/Author's Name:  itstehchibiness
Brief Summary/Violations List:
Enter key abuse, over-use of the word 'said', The grammar was okay (Shocker), the author sometimes self inserts him/herself when the point of view is third person limited, abuse of japanese phrases, ect.
Brief excerpt, Not-so-brief excerpt, MST, etc.: The description: Sakura and Sasuke were childhood friends; Sasuke then moves away to Japan and promises he will never forget her. Sakura then moves to Japan years later and goes to Sasuke’s school and finds that he is a mean, non caring, girl using, alcoholic. And to make that 10 times worse, he has COMPLETLEY forgotten about Sakura! But then Sakura catches an incurable disease and doesn’t have very long to live. So Sakura decides to spend the last few months of her life trying to get Sasuke to remember her and get the sweet Sasuke back.
Rating:  2.5/5 *headdesks*

I gave it a 2.5 because of the amount of random japanese phrases that litered this piece (some are not even used correctly...). I was starting to wonder if it was still in english at some points. The writing style improved as you went along, thankfully showing prgress. I read some of his/her more recent story and can see that they are improvoving with the writing style, but still having random phrases of japanese littering their work. I guess that's why I did a 2.5 and not a full out three. The story is of interest to a point. (I guess I'm being an optimist...)

So... I guess that ends that :D

For anyone up to the challenge...
by apathy4_10 (apathy4_10)
at June 10th, 2008 (05:04 pm)
current location: a free internet cafe
current mood: accomplished
current song: No Good Deed- Wicked

Hello,

I've been a lurker for a while and just decided to join the group to post something. I come to you from Fanfiction.net. You're excited, right? Anyway, I tend to read stories on there (often jump between fandoms) but I've kept in touch with one writer from the Naruto fandom, buttons413. http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1030109/buttons413

She wrote a Naruto story two years ago and is working on revisions. She's told me that she considers the character a Mary Sue and hates how she wrote it, but keeps it up in the hope that someone will critique it. Unfortunately for the girl, she's scared to come forth and ask for it to be sporked or ridiculed for some weird reason (I think she's just very ashamed of it and respects sporking-like communities). So, I offered to use her account---as I am---and post a request for her.

Her story is called "Iris." There are several things that are wrong, but she's hoping someone could give her pointers on what she should focus on. She's working on original stories (and a Newsies fanfic) and she wants people to point out what she's doing wrong (characterization, originality, description) so she can use the knowledge in the future.

It's a long story so no one is expected to comment, or even read, it all. There are two sequels. If someone wants to, those can be sporked since they're shorter (one is a oneshot and the other is four chapters, I believe). If a person just wants to read the sequels and wants to understand the concept then feel free to ask. =)

Thank you for your time,

Sally =D

Representative of Shyshi


Iris: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3027048/1/Iris

Summary: A high end private school has been closed temporarily because of a fire. Now the high and mighty students must go to a public school in a shifty neighborhood where Naruto and his friends await them. Rated for safety. SasuxOC

Quizilla? Here's a wonderful piece of garbage for you.
by Save The Canon (save_the_canon)
at May 20th, 2008 (07:43 pm)

Username: Gaaras-darkangel
Main interest of fandom-rape The repeated creation of the über-gorgeous Sues that every guy loves for no reason and all of them want to have sex with her. The author can't paragraph, spell, use proper grammar, punctuation, stick to one tense, blablabla. She can't compose anything original or something that actually keeps something of the Naruto-canon, or characters intact.

Waiting for the last day of school♥ [userpic]
Antidote(s)!
by Waiting for the last day of school♥ (rip_silver)
at February 24th, 2008 (06:55 pm)

Ok, so I found a Quizilla user that has some pretty good fanfics.
Although nearly all the characters she uses are Mary-Sues, I think they're well-written and stuff. (Also, check out the 2 Mary Sue parodies under One-Shots!)

http://www.quizilla.com/users/Serendepity/quizzes/ 
 

Waiting for the last day of school♥ [userpic]
Newb with really bad fic!
by Waiting for the last day of school♥ (rip_silver)
at February 23rd, 2008 (12:23 am)

So I'm a lurker on here, but a big poster on Naruto Horrors.

I was searching for my favorite Naruto yuri fic (Naruto Yuri Unleased. It's a pretty good antidote if you're like 18+) and this shitfic, Team 13 popped up. The Sasuke-faggirl's name is Yuri. I LOL'D.

Since I don't know how to put my MiST directly here without stretching the page, the link to my MiST is here. *BONUS! I MiSTed some of the reviews!*

http://rip-silver.livejournal.com/6159.html 

Come while it's still warm! Pure crap from Shitzilla!
by shinobi_demon (shinobi_demon)
at January 22nd, 2008 (06:18 pm)

I don't think I require any further explanation when I mention 'Naruto fan-fiction' and 'Quizilla!' in one sentence.
The culprit in question is 'SolitaryMaiden' who can't fucking write and she'll send her band of retards after you if you 'dare' to flame her.

All the more reason for me to do some stabbety-stabbing up her ass by sporking: The Pain Hidden In The Scars

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Random [userpic]
Onward, the Wild Hunt . . .
by Random (randomsome1)
at October 15th, 2007 (10:54 am)

I found a plagiarist in the GaaSaku section of our fandom. She's definitely already hit my work. However, I read over her fic and noticed that her style & narrative voice varied wildly between the first two chapters and the last.

yrbanys confirmed my suspicions last night--yes, this author had stolen chunks of someone else's work for her third chapter. But due to some browser screwups and ff.net eating links, we can't relocate the author to alert them.


So this goes out to you google-savvy people, or you GaaSaku 'shippers who know your authors . . . Does anyone have any idea who else this kid's ripped off here?

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